Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck
This was very interesting. I hope you continue. I enjoyed the fact that you were creative by using the idea of Ten to defend yourself so he can use his quirks, you were very creative. I wonder if you could maybe allow him to combine Nen with QUirk, so he can use Ten and his Quirk to defend himself, almost like an ultimate defense, basically like Gaaras Sand armor, but it's with creation flames. Otherwise, I enjoyed this and I hope you continued.
I LIKE IT!!! This story is interesting and while MC has an amazing power that doesn't mean that everything is on easy mode. The characters are interesting and everyone so far are already important members of the story.I am still a little worried. Surely Mr. Author, you won't kill his girlfriend for the ' Berserk demon god ' trope (cliché) right??? Otherwise I would rather leave it as it is and keep my good impression...Additionally...his demonic beasts are they males or females?
This book has the most exposition I’ve ever seen in a story before. So, so much spoon-fed information that we didn’t need, along with strange naming of characters and countries and completely unrealistic behavior of people and society. Might be the world world building I’ve ever witnessed. I had high hopes.
I really had no other choice but to add this to my library. It’s witty, entertaining, and well written. A genuine rare diamond that I will be sure to follow along with! You’re doing a fantastic job!
This novel has some weird inconsistencies in it. These could be fixed if the author tries to flesh out the story information more and put more thought in their world building and word choice. The story has a relatively fast pace and this seems to be caused by the lack of thought the protagonist has. The protagonist doesn’t seem to observe the world he is in well and this is confirmed by the lack of his use or the author’s lack of including the protagonist’s use of his “Apraisal Skill”. Furthermore, a good amount of the novel takes place in the protagonist’s head (his thoughts) rather than descriptions of the world of the novel.I personally like the concept the novel is based upon but the rest of the novel is subpar so far. (I’m around 20 chapters in.)
This is a really difficult review.The pace is fast. Action is good. Snu-Snu is good. A harem story that advances quickly. World development is almost nonexistent (I am at chap 81 right now, the limit of premium chapters up yo date).And there is a System by which, supposedly, the MC goes from really really weak to the strongest being. But here is where the difficulties begin. The System makes no sense. The strengthening mechanism is vague at best. Cultivation doesn't mean anything either. MC strength is measured in levels, but we can 't compare it with anyone. The System messages and interventions are the worst, since they don't provide any information at all.Mana, cultivation, levels none of that matters because there is no comprehensive structure behind them. We know they are there, but the author never bothered to explain. Maybe even he doesn't know how things work. I suspect he doesn't even care.Also, there are a few inconsistencies that are irksome, because they are important. All is piling up. The Author wants to tell his story and he won't let something as silly as logic and making bloody sense to interfere.
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